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She earns.  He spends.
She listens.  He talks.
She talks.  He hears.
She eats.  He stares.
She looks.  He cries.
She cries.  He leaves.
©2004-2009 ~adaley
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This is a piece that I wrote on a whim in about five minutes. Please critique it because like I said I finished it in about five minutes.

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:iconxxdarkangelbabyxx:
i like that... its good. it reminds me f my parents and how they're like that and ya.

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:iconadaley:
Thank you. The more I read it the more it seems like something that Sylvia Plath would write and she is my idol.
:iconxxdarkangelbabyxx:
sylivia plath?????? who is she??????????? and your very welcome.

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:iconadaley:
Sylvia Plath is one of the greatest poets of our time.
:iconxxdarkangelbabyxx:
oh yeah^^

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( . .)
c('')('')
?´¨)
¸.·´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨)
(¸.·´ (¸.·`?.Stephanie¸.·`
(\__/)
(O.o )
(> < )
U U
:iconstarionwolf:
I like your smile, pink lips and red hair. You're pretty! I like the water in the background. You've got clothes on now. lol

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Saluton, God dag, välkommen, welkom, guten Tag, bonjour, Bom dia, konnichiwa, hola, Szia, Ciao!
:iconadaley:
Thank you.....did you read the poem though?

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I'll take a knife to my own bright eyes.

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Nov 21, 2004, 12:20:17 PM

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